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What I have or am reading, discovering, rediscovering or enjoying in print books or around the web.


What I've Recently Read...

315b Writing page-turning fiction depends on your ability to create rock-solid, believable scenes. Scenes act as dynamic structures that thrust both your characters and readers forward through conflict, baiting them with goals that may--or may not--be obtained. Writing good scenes makes the difference between a tale that crackles with energy and momentum and a story that falls flat. In Novelist's Essential Guide to Crafting Scenes, Raymond Obstfeld leads you through the creative process, examining all the elements that go into making scenes successful, cohesive and compelling.

I attended a writer's conference where Raymond Obstfeld spoke and he has such a humorous down to earth manner about him. His family sat and listened proudly as he shared his advice for how to become effective writers and shared the commonality of the fears that all writers face. This from a man who has been published over 40 times and he still feels like his stuff gets crappy. After, I felt compelled to support him in some way, I had gained so much. I purchased a copy of Novelist's Essential Guide to Crafting Scenes and then promptly shelved it as I stopped reading for time. I picked it up again a week ago. Already my scene structures and plot are showing marked improvements. The man is awesome. I am LOVING this Book.
I THOUGHT: This book has so much great advice and examples to grasp concepts. There are exercises to do that instantly help you to get the concepts even faster. Best of all it makes sense and works. I can see the difference not just in the scenes I'm writing but how I approach them. I love the accessible examples listed and the the writing voice of the author. The book works and for me I saw improvement after a very short time (though still improving)
In The End: Yet another for my "within reach" shelf, practical advice shared.


What I'm Reading Now...



EMSMGruesome slasher murders are spreading terror in San Francisco. The pressure is on the police force to track down the killer before another young woman is found, throat cut, body abandoned. Homicide Inspector Kate Gillespie is picked to lead the search with her partner, old-timer Sam Scolari. This is the case that could make Kate's career. But the next victim stops her in her tracks--Sam's ex-wife. All evidence points to him. He goes underground, leaving Kate alone to prove his innocence, or his guilt. Kate has to find the killer before the cops find Sam. Complicating matters is Mike "Torrid" Torrance, the sexiest Internal Affairs officer ever to carry a badge. He's watching Kate, an assignment that brings them far closer than they expected. Without a partner she can trust . . . with a killer and a cop watching her every move . . . can Kate find the truth before it's too late?"

I had the EXCELLENT fortune to meet Robin Burcell at a writer's conference in the summer of 2007. Besides being very smart, lovely, down to earth, witty and a talented writer, she is also an amazingly cool person too (Fan-girl much, me? Nooooo!). After the conference, I started reading Every Move She Makes and loved it. Sadly, the timing of my reading coincided with a tragic event in my life - and I simply lost my heart to read anything for a while. So I never finished this book or some others from that time. It hasn't been until the new year that I've felt moved to start reading books (or anything really) for my pleasure again. This book is a joyful rediscovery for me:
STATUS: READING IN PROGRESS




MinionDamali Richards is a rising star of Warriors of Light Records--but her fans would never guess that she is also the most important vampire hunter in a millennium. However, unfortunately for the inexperienced young huntress, the vampires and demons have both discovered her existence. An age-old war escalates to unprecedented heights of violence as the dark forces strive to slay Damali before she comes of age and gains her full powers.

As an omnivorous reader I've found overall I like urban fantasy genre. I resisted reading L.A. Banks' Vampire Huntress Series for a long time because it had been likened to Buffy The Vampire Slayer (I am a big Buffy fan). Why would I want to read a "knock off"? So far it isn't persay. This first in the series (which is apparently only a few books from it's end but is a pretty darn long series) likens to Buffy in that the character's development is a mix. Its soemwhere between the first ill-fated movie's concept of learning how to deal with some new abilities and the first TV season of BTVS, where the new slayer has more than a clue but not enough and is making connections and learning the ropes. Ms Banks does show a different take on the vampire slayer mythos and there is a really nice interpretation of vampires as far as I have read. So far, the first part of the book has a lot of well stated set up and though entertained, I wasn't pulled in completely. Then we hit the center and a bit more crucial reveal and now things are cooking. I want to know what's next. This is a very good sign.
STATUS: READING IN PROGRESS

2008 List Of Books I Have Read

Novelist's Essential Guide to Crafting Scenes - Raymond Obstfeld (Feb)
IN THE END: Yet another for my "within reach" shelf, practical advice shared.

Writing Down The Bones
- Natalie Goldberg (Feb)
IN THE END: This will always be a book on my "within reach" bookshelf.

The Unnatural Inquirer - Simon R. Green (Jan)
IN THE END: Good read and examination of the deepening bonds between John and Shotgun Suzie. I feel like this is a set up book for the next story arc. In the end, I'm still addicted. :D

An Ice Cold Grave - Charlaine Harris (Jan)
IN THE END: This was a hit. From her writing schedule looks like it will be a while for the next one. I'll be waiting.